Silver Eyes edition by Michael Fitzgerald Literature Fiction eBooks
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4,539 word short story.
One week of a young man's life alters the course of his destiny.
Silver Eyes edition by Michael Fitzgerald Literature Fiction eBooks
I thought that this story started out with a great premise, and even later on had some good direction. Though, I feel like as I went along, I was getting less and less of a story and more of a list of events.The only conflict in this story takes place at the beginning. It's an event alluded to in the description and it changes the course of the main characters' lives. What happens after is only the surface of the rest of their lives. It lacks depth, in my opinion, and (even though this is fiction) feels much too unrealistic for the story that's written. I think if the author had dialed down the extraordinary outcome drastically, the story could have held my enjoyment for much longer, and in turn I'd have a different opinion about it.
Still, there is something to the story. With the expansion of some key points, and working in some conflicts/obstacles, I think this could be much better as a novella or novel.
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Silver Eyes edition by Michael Fitzgerald Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
I thought that this story started out with a great premise, and even later on had some good direction. Though, I feel like as I went along, I was getting less and less of a story and more of a list of events.
The only conflict in this story takes place at the beginning. It's an event alluded to in the description and it changes the course of the main characters' lives. What happens after is only the surface of the rest of their lives. It lacks depth, in my opinion, and (even though this is fiction) feels much too unrealistic for the story that's written. I think if the author had dialed down the extraordinary outcome drastically, the story could have held my enjoyment for much longer, and in turn I'd have a different opinion about it.
Still, there is something to the story. With the expansion of some key points, and working in some conflicts/obstacles, I think this could be much better as a novella or novel.
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